Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Sentence Pleasure

I don't have time for a long post today, so I thought you might enjoy these few sentences from my WIP!

Her unusual shade of blond hair shone like silver in a riverbed full of gold sunshine. Void of the popular curl that most women slaved over, the spun silk of her hair cascaded down her back like a graceful waterfall. A sudden desire arose within him to run his hands through its butter softness – like a man would run his hand through the silt at the bottom of a river looking for silver and gold, the water running over his hand, caressing it with its smoothness.

Happy Kisses!!!

2 comments:

Joan Sowards said...

Beautifully written. Very descriptive.

Rachel Rager said...

Thanks, Joan!