Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Sentence Pleasure

I don't have time for a long post today, so I thought you might enjoy these few sentences from my WIP!

Her unusual shade of blond hair shone like silver in a riverbed full of gold sunshine. Void of the popular curl that most women slaved over, the spun silk of her hair cascaded down her back like a graceful waterfall. A sudden desire arose within him to run his hands through its butter softness – like a man would run his hand through the silt at the bottom of a river looking for silver and gold, the water running over his hand, caressing it with its smoothness.

Happy Kisses!!!


Joan Sowards said...

Beautifully written. Very descriptive.

Rachel Rager said...

Thanks, Joan!